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Old 13-10-2009   #1
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Default Poem in the middle of the night

When alone one realizes that all time goes on forever, to no end, to no hope
There is no compassion for those who were rejected by love, and there shall be none, for no one
Restless nights are followed by tireless days, without thanks for work, without a pleasant heart at home
Couples passing by only arouse hatred and jealousy, no love, no hope
You ask yourself why anyone would love me, hating yourself, hurting yourself
Time and time again thoughts of the end cross your mind, with nothing, nobody holding you back
Whence shall come my heavenly angel to love me, this life, or never
Is anyone doomed to be forever alone, unappreciated, lost and soulless
Praying for death to come and reap away, swing at the empty, heartless void
All you can do is wait, wait, wait…
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Great you are representing our present condition which is like a Diamond, in look it's so beautiful but in practice it's scrap.
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What a relief to see another saddened lonely human on this planet just tired of this life!
Don't get me wrong..I actually love life and people. That's the problem. To be sensitive and loving,and compassionate on this planet proves to be a painful exsistence! Ugh!

Lonely am I!
Frustrated am I!
Breaching the brink of hopeless,am I!

This is a poem I just wrote that I would like to share with you:

Alone I sit here with my pen
And all these things within my head
My eyes they hurt from all they have seen
My cheeks are swollen and worn from tears of pain
I'm tired,I'm empty
I wish it would all go away
"Leave me alone" is all I think
But then I am aware I can not breathe
I have no life within me
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